In our opening two minutes we thought that it would be effective to use eerie soundtracks and not much vocals. However, in our scene the words used by our characters help the audience understand what is going on and what is expected to happen.
TARA: Hi it's Tara, sorry I can't get to the phone right now, but please leave a message after the tone.
ELLIE: Look Tara, you obviously don't care so, don't speak to me again.
*****GASP NOISES********
*****STRUGGLING NOISES******
BELLA: Is it done?
ROSEMARY: She's dead.
BELLA: How'd you do it?
******PLASTIC BAG RUSTLING******
BELLA: Where's the body?
ROSEMARY: I left her, down the Alley.
BELLA: We never speak of this again.
This is our script, it may become different once everything is done or if we have to change parts of the film. I feel it's quite subtle but gives away details and helps explain what the film is about and what's to come later in the film.
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